My Good Friend and I

I have many friends. But I like Sunny best. He is my good friend. Sunny is ten years old. He has two small eyes. He is thin and tall. He like reading picture books, watching TV, and he also likes playing computergames.     

我和我最好的朋友

在每个人的成长过程中,总会遇到几个知心好友。也许他们不是那么"酷",也许他们每个人都有自己的小小缺点,但我们仍应当珍视每份友谊,不要轻易放弃自己的好友。     

我的朋友

我有一个朋友,她的名字叫张铭。她的英文名字叫Lily。Lily今年10岁,她长得又高又瘦。她有一头长发,两只大大的眼睛和一张圆圆的脸。她喜欢跳绳和唱英文歌曲。     

My Friend

<正>Tom King is my good friend. He works hard at his lessons. He is one of the best students in our class. He likes basketball and football. We often play together.There are four people in his family. His father worked on a farm three years ago, but now he is a manager of a company in Beijing. His mother is an English teacher of a college and his brother is a worker. The Kings have been in Beijing for three years since they came to work in China.One day, Tom and I went fishing by the river near our school. Half an hour later, Tom caught four fish and I caught five. Tom said to me,You are good at fishing.Thank you. You     

陈佳欣 可爱

出生日期：1999年9月22日爱好：画画座右铭：没有成功的理由。只有失败的教训。就读学校：湖南省邵阳市第六中学初一338班指导老师：李兰     

给我的朋友

You have such a
positive outlook on life
Your words are always encouraging
Your face is lit up with excitement
Your actions are so straightforward     

My Good Friend

Hello,everybody!Do you have a good friend?I have a good friend.She is a nice girl.Her name is Li Xue.She is thirteen.We are in the same class.She likes learning math and English.She also likes singing and dancing.On weekends she likes to listen to light music and draw.She likes sports after school.She always plays table tennis with me.She likes vegetables and fruit,so she is healthy.     

我最好的朋友（英文）

<正>我有一个好朋友,他叫王林,来自淮北。他14岁了,看上去很有趣。他很胖,大脑袋、短头发、大眼睛、大耳朵、小鼻子小嘴巴。王林与我同校不同班,他在6班,我在2班,我们常在一起玩。他非常喜欢足球,我们在同一球队。梅西是他最喜爱的球员。每个星期天早上我们一起踢球。     

My Good Friend

<正>Jack is one of my best friend~①.He is a student in Grade Seven.He is thirteen years old this year.He comes from the UK.He is very tall with short black hair.He has two big eyes and big mouth~②.He likes playing football and collect~③ stamps in his free time.He is very outgoing and be~④ friendly to others.He always gets good grades in his study.His favorite subject is English and after class he often helps me on~⑤ my English,though     

My Best Friend

<正>My best friend is Jacky Lin. Jacky is 12 years old. He is in Grade 7. Jacky is very tall and strong. He likes playing tennis. He has a dream. He hopes to be a great tennis player. Jacky and I are members of the school tennis club. We often go there after school. And we often watch tennis matches on TV on weekends.     

我的朋友乔伊斯

有一位能和自己分享快乐、承受悲伤的好朋友是件多么开心的事情啊!刘洁同学把她的好朋友介绍给了我们大家,我们也来写写自己的好朋友,也把自己的好朋友介绍给大家吧.     

我最好的朋友

我最好的朋友是一个中国女孩,她11岁。我们在同一个班。她有一双小眼睛和长长的头发。她喜欢溜冰,而且溜得很好。我们有一个共向的爱好——看动面片。周末我们经常在一起看动画片。她非常喜欢英语．她的英语说得非常好。我喜欢数学,我的数学学得很好。因此．我们常常互相帮助。     

My Best Friend

Do you know Justin?Oh,not the famous singer.He’s my best friend.He is a tall and handsome boy but looks a little fat.Justin works hard at all his lessons.He is good at Maths,English and Geography.And he knows a lot about English and Geography.He likes sports.He plays volleyball very well and he is a member of our school volleyball team.He is generous,honest,humorous and kind.He     

My Good Friend

<正>Hello,everybody!Do you have a good friend?I have a good friend.She is a nice girl.Her name is Li Xue.She is thirteen.We are in the same class.She likes learning math and English.She also likes singing and dancing.On weekends she likes to listen to light music and draw.She likes sports after school.She always plays table tennis with me.She likes vegetables and fruit,so she is healthy.     

My Best Friend

<正>I have a best friend. He is outgoing and helpful. He can get along with others easily and he always helps people in need. He is thoughtful and creative. He always makes some inventions by himself. He is good at communicating with other people. He likes cooperating with others. He is     

My Pen Friend

<正>Hello,everybody!Helen,an Australian student,will come to study in our class in ten days.As her pen friend,I’m glad to tell you something about her.Helen,a 16-year-old girl,is my pen friend.She lives in Sydney with her parents.She is beautiful,kind and warm-hearted.Helen always takes an active part in school activities.She enjoys table tennis very much.In her spare time,she likes taking photos,too.Besides,she     

作文点评（二）

本能很好的表达内容要求的意思,层次清楚,较为通顺,能恰当的运用所学的短语、句型。但是,有些方面还得注意。现分析如下。