My family and the animals

My father is a tall and strong man. My mother tells me that when my father works in white clothes in the hospital, he looks like a pertain. My mother is very strict with her stu- dents. Some boys call her Mother Tiger.     

学生习作点评

点评：这是一篇小作者的习作。他将人物的形象与动物的特点有机地结合起来，使文中的人物栩栩如生，让我们看到了身高体胖的爸爸、严厉的妈妈、和蔼可亲的爷爷、默默奉献的奶奶，纵观全文，语言表达较准确，语义连贯．行文流畅．不失为一篇优秀的学生习作。