| 摘 要： | Wang Mei is my English teacher.She comes from Jinan.She is thirty-two years old.She is a middle-aged woman with big beautiful eyes and short black hair.Smile is always on her friend- ly face and she is getting on very well with her students.She has been an English teacher for 10 years and she teaches very well.She is helpful.Whenever we have questions,she'll help us.She is very strict with us.We all love her very much.【点评】这是一篇命题作文。小作者灵活运用所学词汇和句型,通过比较地道的语言和不断变换的表达方式,向读者简单介绍了自己英语老师的基本情况和她的和蔼可亲,文章条理清楚,内容充实。通过本文可以看出小作者有较好的语言运用能力。
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