摘 要: | 正本文卷面美观,句子流畅,要点齐全。亮点如下:难能可贵的是,全文没有一个单词拼写错误,诸如convenient,vital,flight,August,address等极易拼写错误的词,都拼写得准确无误;文中的复合句使用地道,如:定语从句which you are fond of,状语从句If it’s convenient for you,状语从句in ca s e yo u do n’t ha ve tim e;文中有两处用到了非谓语动词:wearing a pair of glasses及to keep the n umber of his flight in your(注:原文有your这个词,最好去掉,因为keep…in mind是固定词组)
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